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Morning Mantra
Creator, be my wine.
Be my bread.
Be the warmth in
my morning coffee.
Be the swirling
memories of love
given and received
without guilt or shame.
Be my bread.
Be the warmth in
my morning coffee.
Be the swirling
memories of love
given and received
without guilt or shame.
Published 6th Oct 2023
Author's Note
The mantra has become a repeated prayer based on an earlier poem I wrote one morning after a wonderful night.
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6th Oct 2023 12:33pm
6th Oct 2023 7:41pm
6th Oct 2023 12:47pm
The first half reminds me of the bread and wine of communion. The second half speaks of memories of enjoyed communion, raising thoughts of lovers being each other's bread and wine.
6th Oct 2023 7:42pm
Thank you. You always read me carefully and sometimes point out things I didn't see when writing. I think of you as a kindred spirit.
7th Oct 2023 00:16am
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