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One night...
my body organs
are tied with chords..
tease them..
hum with them..
they want to dance..
mould them in posture..
they want to surrender you..
bite them..strike on them..
they want to melt..
use your hot weapon on them...
are tied with chords..
tease them..
hum with them..
they want to dance..
mould them in posture..
they want to surrender you..
bite them..strike on them..
they want to melt..
use your hot weapon on them...
Published 26th Sep 2023
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26th Sep 2023 1:57pm
26th Sep 2023 2:02pm
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- Edited 29th Dec 2023 8:45pm
26th Sep 2023 2:03pm
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26th Sep 2023 2:08pm
😊 thank you..i'm glad that you focused on the beauty and meaning behind the words rather than reducing them only sexual innuendos...
Anonymous
- Edited 29th Dec 2023 8:45pm
26th Sep 2023 2:11pm
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Anonymous
26th Sep 2023 2:20pm
It's the visuals that speak with so much sensuality
in this vibe, So nicely done.
in this vibe, So nicely done.
26th Sep 2023 2:28pm
It's always satisfying to know that someone has been touched by my stuff n they too have resonated with them...
27th Sep 2023 6:56am
27th Sep 2023 9:57am
28th Sep 2023 2:50am
Are we talking Bb minor here? I'm talking about the chords, of course! Are these happy or sad chords? I sense a hot rock anthem would be most suitable with plenty of barre/power chords. For one night only... I will bring my weapon! What I mean is... I will bring my guitar. 🎸🎙😉
28th Sep 2023 3:01am
Happy chords of course😎 n yaa do come with your weapon ha ha... I know...with your guitar Billy😄
