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One night...
my body organs
are tied with chords..
tease them..
hum with them..
they want to dance..
mould them in posture..
they want to surrender you..
bite them..strike on them..
they want to melt..
use your hot weapon on them...
are tied with chords..
tease them..
hum with them..
they want to dance..
mould them in posture..
they want to surrender you..
bite them..strike on them..
they want to melt..
use your hot weapon on them...
Written by
dimpy
(dimpsmoon)
Published 26th Sep 2023
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Re. One night...
26th Sep 2023 1:57pm
Re: Re. One night...
26th Sep 2023 2:02pm
Anonymous
- Edited 29th Dec 2023 8:45pm
26th Sep 2023 2:03pm
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Re: Re. One night...
26th Sep 2023 2:08pm
😊 thank you..i'm glad that you focused on the beauty and meaning behind the words rather than reducing them only sexual innuendos...
Anonymous
- Edited 29th Dec 2023 8:45pm
26th Sep 2023 2:11pm
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Re. One night...
26th Sep 2023 2:20pm
It's the visuals that speak with so much sensuality
in this vibe, So nicely done.
in this vibe, So nicely done.
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Re: Re. One night...
26th Sep 2023 2:28pm
It's always satisfying to know that someone has been touched by my stuff n they too have resonated with them...
Re. One night...
27th Sep 2023 6:56am
Re: Re. One night...
27th Sep 2023 9:57am
Re: Re. One night...
28th Sep 2023 2:50am
Are we talking Bb minor here? I'm talking about the chords, of course! Are these happy or sad chords? I sense a hot rock anthem would be most suitable with plenty of barre/power chords. For one night only... I will bring my weapon! What I mean is... I will bring my guitar. 🎸🎙😉
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Re: Re. One night...
28th Sep 2023 3:01am
Happy chords of course😎 n yaa do come with your weapon ha ha... I know...with your guitar Billy😄