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Eternal Kiss
His lips like berries, they taste so sweet...
And seasoned from past fallen feats...
I am his last, they'll be no others...
For we are bound by eternity, true lovers...
And seasoned from past fallen feats...
I am his last, they'll be no others...
For we are bound by eternity, true lovers...
Published 23rd Sep 2023
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23rd Sep 2023 7:44pm
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24th Sep 2023 00:46am
24th Sep 2023 3:06am
Dear SW,
I enjoyed the sanctity and commitment in this piece. To me, it gives hope that two people can make a vow and keep it. Lovely write. H🌷
I enjoyed the sanctity and commitment in this piece. To me, it gives hope that two people can make a vow and keep it. Lovely write. H🌷
24th Sep 2023 4:28am
Thank you, the feeling of having one person who you know is yours till death is so exciting and yet undescribable. My husband is the inspiration in every love poem I've written. I hope to continue on using him ❤️
