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The perfect moment
My longing eyes drew
Down your hollow's hilt till the
Base of resistance.
The siege now begins.
Down your hollow's hilt till the
Base of resistance.
The siege now begins.
Published 19th Sep 2023
Author's Note
Yeah haha, I thought I'd try something different. I love the rush of sexy poems as much as the next person, but I'll leave the erotic writing to the experts like yourselves. This was honestly really difficult to convey into words lol. I commend all your talents
Thanks for reading though~
Thanks for reading though~
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21st Sep 2023 8:28pm
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22nd Sep 2023 2:01am
What happened to your resistance? Joking aside, the piece was both descriptive & suggestive. Sounds like you have the right ingredients to tackle any style of writing you wish to put your mind to.
22nd Sep 2023 2:08pm
