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Nothing Left
He used to love how my hair
swirled away from my neck when
he tied it up. He said it
was the passage way between
the beauty of my body
and the beauty of my mind.
I miss Shane! I have nothing
but to die.
He said he loved the place where
one of us ended and the
other began. His eyes would
drift down to see our joining.
Beautiful was the mooring
of a ship at sea to shore.
I miss Shane! I have nothing
but to die.
swirled away from my neck when
he tied it up. He said it
was the passage way between
the beauty of my body
and the beauty of my mind.
I miss Shane! I have nothing
but to die.
He said he loved the place where
one of us ended and the
other began. His eyes would
drift down to see our joining.
Beautiful was the mooring
of a ship at sea to shore.
I miss Shane! I have nothing
but to die.
Published 12th Sep 2023
Author's Note
I told Shane of my affair and pregnancy. He was hurt. He didn't become angry but quietly left.
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Reach out for help, counsellor, friends, hotlines. Sit in the emergency room of your local hospital until you can talk with a psychiatrist. Do whatever you need to get help. This doesn’t need to be the end.
12th Sep 2023 5:36pm
But for your missing Shane, the descriptions of how he liked you ring beautiful. Never thought of a woman's hair like this:
He said it
was the passage way between
the beauty of my body
and the beauty of my mind.
I echo Trillium's comment as to seeking help.
He said it
was the passage way between
the beauty of my body
and the beauty of my mind.
I echo Trillium's comment as to seeking help.
13th Sep 2023 7:54am
The truth did set you free but you live the consequences of your actions. Keep on writing. I'm here if you need a friend to talk to.
13th Sep 2023 12:04pm
I wholeheartedly understand the pain you are living in. If you need to talk, please DM me. I know how difficult it can be to reach out, how impossible it feels, but people here support you and love you.
