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Pneuma

Hiss of amplifiers.  
Waves of sound  
permeating my consciousness.  
Tendrils of music  
embracing me  
infusing my being.  
A perfect cacophony.  
Waves of sound crashing over me.  
Teasing rhythms  
entwined like lovers.  
Flowing through me.  
Chills of pure ecstasy.  
Building to a shattering crescendo  
Energy  
Emotion
Peaking
 
I want to hold onto this feeling  
Live in it.  
 
Waves receding  
Music fades
The final chord  
To silence.  
Released from the spell.  
Remembered joy
like bodies joining.  
 
 
Written by Trillium
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Author's Note
I love music. There are some songs that I really connect with. They give me chills; listening is pure pleasure. Have been thinking of this write for a while and it really came together listening to Pneuma by Tool. It is not just modern music, for example, Schubert’s Death and the Maiden has the same effect. The opening to the first movement is just shattering. Give it a listen (and turn up the volume let the music crash over you)
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