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In The Water For A Swim
As
soon as
both Derek
and Maggie looked
around and made sure
that no one else was there,
they stripped down and got into
the water only to have them
hear someone say "wait" which made them turn
around and see Sally standing on the
shore with a pair of towels and saying
"My dad saw what you were doing. You
guys need to get out of there and
dressed right now." only to have
Derek and Maggie laugh
and invite Sally
to join them in
the water
for a
swim.
soon as
both Derek
and Maggie looked
around and made sure
that no one else was there,
they stripped down and got into
the water only to have them
hear someone say "wait" which made them turn
around and see Sally standing on the
shore with a pair of towels and saying
"My dad saw what you were doing. You
guys need to get out of there and
dressed right now." only to have
Derek and Maggie laugh
and invite Sally
to join them in
the water
for a
swim.
Published 9th Sep 2023
Author's Note
In this double etheree poem, a couple is about to take a cool swim in some water only to have a friend warn them to get out of there.
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