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Tourist
A tourist
In love
Meandering
Taking snapshots
Enjoying the veiw
Never participating
Watching love
Pass by
Image after image
Looked at from afar
Scared of my feelings
Overwhelming
Spiritual
Emotional
Spiralling out
Of my control
Fear of the deep
Hurt in my chest
The joy of making love
Was never an issue
Passing the fire
Feeling the ecstasy
Its the silences
Where doubts breed
In love
Meandering
Taking snapshots
Enjoying the veiw
Never participating
Watching love
Pass by
Image after image
Looked at from afar
Scared of my feelings
Overwhelming
Spiritual
Emotional
Spiralling out
Of my control
Fear of the deep
Hurt in my chest
The joy of making love
Was never an issue
Passing the fire
Feeling the ecstasy
Its the silences
Where doubts breed
Published 8th Sep 2023
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8th Sep 2023 1:47pm
Aww this is so special.. hardly know what to say, its very sweet actually. Someitmes love is hard to grasp even though you want to know its true.
8th Sep 2023 3:03pm
You have woven together a wonderful poem; so enticing and thought provoking. Hugs and peace,Oral
8th Sep 2023 6:37pm
Ye, Tons of tourists out there in the field of Love. Some just never stopping to take really part...........Regards, Robert.
9th Sep 2023 10:49am
The silence... almost an after sex dilemma, right?! I like how you have described your own experiences with love as being like that of a tourist; just passing though, buying a few souvenirs but ultimately packing your bags & heading home! I really like how you've laid this one down on the page but I also like how it made me feel, reading it. 😊
