"Time & Time..."

Tara

The very first thing I noticed was an understanding of font width and font style. Before even digging in, I'm saying "ah presentation, no accidents here."

Then the trouble, not able to resist it. I understand and you have my interest.

The fault, not what it seems, neither you nor him, but something in-between.

Then you throw in the real complications and addictions and finish with the ellipsis, so it continues... both outside the poem and forward through time. A journey constructed, like I said, with no accidents.

Thank u, Steve, U have made my day , cuz i wasnt even sure how well i did on this, & if n e one would understand...Im glad u did, and wow, U have put a big smile on my face;)

It's beautiful, the sound of the poetry flows up and down, looping in my mouth, "Dipping and diving", the pitch rising and falling.
Keep it up :)

Thank u;) I'm happy that u read and enjoyed, and its truly nice 2 know your thoughts on it;)