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"Time & Time..."

Every now and again I slide
� Dip and dive
� � In and out
� � � Of trouble
� � � � Of lies
� � � � � �I've twisted
� � � � � � �Not able to resist it
� What is it
� � �About a man?
� � � � Sometimes I can't stand it
� � � � Seems like he's manipulated
� � � � � �My mind
� � � � � �Time and time
� � � � � � �I find
� � � � � � I'm thinking
� � � � � � � �Only
� � � � � � � � �Of him...
� � � � � � I've twisted
� � � � � � � A fabrication
� � � � � � � � Of what I wanted
� � � � � � � � � �Needed
� � � � � � � � � � �Him to be...

� � Dipping and diving
� � � � In and out
� � � � � � Of trouble
� � � � � � � �Of lies
� � � � � � � � � I've twisted
� � � � � � � � � � Not able to resist it
� � � � � � � � � � � �Being with him...
� � � � � � � �He's
� � � � � � � � � �Not even mine...
� � � � � � � � � � � �Time and time
� � � � � � � � � � � � � I find
� � � � � � � � � � � � � � I'm crying
� � � � � � � � � � � � � � � More only
� � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � �Because of him...
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written by Tara A. aka LL

Written by LyricalLady

Published 21st Apr 2012

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braggman (Steve Bragg)

24th Apr 2012 4:10am

Tara

The very first thing I noticed was an understanding of font width and font style. Before even digging in, I'm saying "ah presentation, no accidents here."

Then the trouble, not able to resist it. I understand and you have my interest.

The fault, not what it seems, neither you nor him, but something in-between.

Then you throw in the real complications and addictions and finish with the ellipsis, so it continues... both outside the poem and forward through time. A journey constructed, like I said, with no accidents.

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LyricalLady

24th Apr 2012 5:16pm

Thank u, Steve, U have made my day , cuz i wasnt even sure how well i did on this, & if n e one would understand...Im glad u did, and wow, U have put a big smile on my face;)