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Conscience
My thoughts
have become limited
My branches want to
spread in the open sky
but my roots have started
turning towards you..
you have captured me
in your elusive soul...
in my depths,
fruits, flowers, plants
are yearning to be born,
but your grip has
become so strong
that they are not able
to come out...
The birds breathing
in my colors are now
pleading to be
imprisoned in your cage...
your existence has
confused my aura...
it has become a circle
in which I am searching for myself...
have become limited
My branches want to
spread in the open sky
but my roots have started
turning towards you..
you have captured me
in your elusive soul...
in my depths,
fruits, flowers, plants
are yearning to be born,
but your grip has
become so strong
that they are not able
to come out...
The birds breathing
in my colors are now
pleading to be
imprisoned in your cage...
your existence has
confused my aura...
it has become a circle
in which I am searching for myself...
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Re: Re. Conscience
4th Sep 2023 2:15pm
in which way to take this is up to you.. I have written my experience here..that how I am forgetting myself.. Well thanks!
Re. Conscience
3rd Sep 2023 8:42pm
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4th Sep 2023 2:12pm
Re. Conscience
4th Sep 2023 2:06am
Would echo above, beautiful
great nature-ful imagery, really quite something. well done
great nature-ful imagery, really quite something. well done
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Re: Re. Conscience
4th Sep 2023 2:12pm
Re. Conscience
4th Sep 2023 2:39am
We are all looking to find ourselves and we do it might be good or bad. Keep on writing.
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Re: Re. Conscience
4th Sep 2023 2:28pm
Sounds quite a scary & dangerous liaison or fight with your conscience but exciting too. This is quite a deep read & obviously I haven't done its interpretation any real justice. 😊
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Re: Re. Conscience
4th Sep 2023 2:49pm
Its end can be dangerous..but can't say for sure..twist can also come..thank you well!
Re. Conscience
6th Sep 2023 10:06am
Cool writing here! This is definitely a favorite of your writes! Enjoyed. Very deep and so well written. Quite the soul journey going on here :)
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6th Sep 2023 12:14pm
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Re. Conscience
7th Sep 2023 4:17am
This was definitely a unique journey
beautifully written and very thought provoking
I enjoyed this vibe a lot
Much respect
Naaj
beautifully written and very thought provoking
I enjoyed this vibe a lot
Much respect
Naaj
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7th Sep 2023 5:27am