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SoundGarden
I will you to call
Shatter my silence
Stirring up commotion
As I lay along the smoke lined
Grasses of my loneliness.
To fill a void,
The noise from your crooked heart
Sour, sweet, sullen song
Inside me
Filling me, to grow
Fertilized, blood, sweat, tears.
Exploding bombs,
Burst into words,
Letters scrabble,
Then shrapnel
As they sow themselves
Into my blooming abyss
All the while, I hold my gaze.
Shatter my silence
Stirring up commotion
As I lay along the smoke lined
Grasses of my loneliness.
To fill a void,
The noise from your crooked heart
Sour, sweet, sullen song
Inside me
Filling me, to grow
Fertilized, blood, sweat, tears.
Exploding bombs,
Burst into words,
Letters scrabble,
Then shrapnel
As they sow themselves
Into my blooming abyss
All the while, I hold my gaze.
Published 21st Apr 2012
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Anonymous
21st Apr 2012 4:27am
It relates much in little by being selective of only the choice words..it's a talent to write that way, keep writing..thank's
21st Apr 2012 4:37am
1st Jun 2012 9:11pm
Before I get into commenting on the poem itself, I'd like to point out that the title of this shares the same name as my favorite band ever! Awesome!
Now about the poem, it's really good, I enjoy the word choice of it the most ;) The flow of the poem was great too. keep up the good work!
Now about the poem, it's really good, I enjoy the word choice of it the most ;) The flow of the poem was great too. keep up the good work!
