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Pent up rage
It built
And it built
From nothing that bothered
To everything that bothered
From one day being entirely blasé
Preferring a beer to being cornered
As per him
In a meaningless discussion
To one day
Using his fists
And destroying her ugly face.
And it built
From nothing that bothered
To everything that bothered
From one day being entirely blasé
Preferring a beer to being cornered
As per him
In a meaningless discussion
To one day
Using his fists
And destroying her ugly face.
Published 27th Aug 2023
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Wow! Violence from you?
Nah! Anyway you've got the genders mixed up.
Unless this is a ménage à trois?
Or a report " As per him " ?
Whatever it's powerful stuff!
Nah! Anyway you've got the genders mixed up.
Unless this is a ménage à trois?
Or a report " As per him " ?
Whatever it's powerful stuff!
27th Aug 2023 6:27pm
29th Aug 2023 2:18pm
Yes, life is filled with anger, hate and expressions of terror, but in the midst there is the hope of UP moments. Hugs and peace,xoxo, Oral
29th Aug 2023 2:19pm
Ya these rare happy moments are the sunshine in our life. Regards, Robert.
16th Sep 2023 00:26am
It's never good to hold emotions, like magma, it will explode in violence and destruction.
Great work.
Great work.
