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It finally did register
Register at the last line,
Lines of love brought down
Down to the level of hoax.
Hoax on a real heart
Heart full of yearning
Yearning for honestly
Honesty of thought and emotion.
Emotion is the carrier
Carrier of divine mind,
Minds the way you’re treated
Treated to abysmal mulct.
Mulct of all real returns
Returns of the day failed,
Failed and fell short
Short of a new death.
Death to love, life and peace
Peace found only below ground
Ground down into the earth
Earth alone with the loner.
Register at the last line,
Lines of love brought down
Down to the level of hoax.
Hoax on a real heart
Heart full of yearning
Yearning for honestly
Honesty of thought and emotion.
Emotion is the carrier
Carrier of divine mind,
Minds the way you’re treated
Treated to abysmal mulct.
Mulct of all real returns
Returns of the day failed,
Failed and fell short
Short of a new death.
Death to love, life and peace
Peace found only below ground
Ground down into the earth
Earth alone with the loner.
Published 25th Aug 2023
Author's Note
This started out as a Loop form poem but is kinda loosely following that since there is no rhyme. It should have abcb or something like that. Posted on Medium dot com, if you want to follow the linkage below. Thanks for reading and commenting! (here and there lol)
https://medium.com/the-poetry-hub/register-274b47298572
https://medium.com/the-poetry-hub/register-274b47298572
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