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Time
I go about
Wasting time
As though dawn
May grant a little more
Failing
To realize
I may not be swept
Upon tomorrow’s shore
Wasting time
As though dawn
May grant a little more
Failing
To realize
I may not be swept
Upon tomorrow’s shore
Published 25th Aug 2023
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25th Aug 2023 4:02am
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25th Aug 2023 6:49am
Dear TMW,
I appreciated your poem as it made me consider how much I take for granted hoping I’ll have another chance to correct some things…
Fingers crossed I’m here again tomorrow to try again. Terrific write.
H🌷
I appreciated your poem as it made me consider how much I take for granted hoping I’ll have another chance to correct some things…
Fingers crossed I’m here again tomorrow to try again. Terrific write.
H🌷
25th Aug 2023 2:42pm
