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Marvelous Creator
When bound together as one, our bodies tremble
with pleasure from places beyond our understanding.
Please forgive my momentary absence.
I was in prayer.
What a marvelous creator we have!
with pleasure from places beyond our understanding.
Please forgive my momentary absence.
I was in prayer.
What a marvelous creator we have!
Published 20th Aug 2023
Author's Note
I don't know the creator of all that is but I am thankful for the pleasures of this life. Selfie is of me in meditation.
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20th Aug 2023 10:57pm
lovely Your poem is wonderful and inspiring
"Marvelous Creator
When bound together as one, our bodies tremble
Following her like a stalker every move.
with pleasure from places beyond our understanding.
Bow and arrow in hand the hunter rushes.
Down the mountainside the wolf clearly ahead .
Please forgive my momentary absence.
I was in prayer wish you to be all mine .
What a marvelous creator we have.
Wanted you by my side to fix things.
And make things right together."
"Marvelous Creator
When bound together as one, our bodies tremble
Following her like a stalker every move.
with pleasure from places beyond our understanding.
Bow and arrow in hand the hunter rushes.
Down the mountainside the wolf clearly ahead .
Please forgive my momentary absence.
I was in prayer wish you to be all mine .
What a marvelous creator we have.
Wanted you by my side to fix things.
And make things right together."
"pleasure from places beyond our understanding.
Mind could not resist going God-ward at these deep words. I wonder if such experience comes from the supernatural, a manifestation of the divine presence amidst an ostensibly biological act, if scientists can't explain it..
Mind could not resist going God-ward at these deep words. I wonder if such experience comes from the supernatural, a manifestation of the divine presence amidst an ostensibly biological act, if scientists can't explain it..
21st Aug 2023 11:19am
21st Aug 2023 1:23pm
