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Only Ashes Remained
In those few fleeting moments
so much of our lives changed.
Lost in soft moans and cries
our lusts for flesh enflamed.
And when we were done
only ashes remained.
so much of our lives changed.
Lost in soft moans and cries
our lusts for flesh enflamed.
And when we were done
only ashes remained.
Published 20th Aug 2023
Author's Note
Wondering where our lives are leading. Pic is edited from a recent selfie.
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20th Aug 2023 4:49am
Always expect the unexpected
That is the one time tested
In a world no interest ever vested
And from the path of righteousness never drifted
A beautiful life ever crafted
That is the one time tested
In a world no interest ever vested
And from the path of righteousness never drifted
A beautiful life ever crafted
20th Aug 2023 7:19am
And when we were done
only ashes remained.
Might paraphrase that as "burned out with passion".
only ashes remained.
Might paraphrase that as "burned out with passion".
21st Aug 2023 11:24am
And when we were done
"As across the veil the spirit flies"
only ashes remained.
seemed like it was missing something of action brfore the ashes...i dunno just a thought.
"As across the veil the spirit flies"
only ashes remained.
seemed like it was missing something of action brfore the ashes...i dunno just a thought.
21st Aug 2023 1:14pm
Death and sex is hot. But in Shakespeare's Much ado about nothing he used the death, meaning to have a sexual orgasm. Keep on writing.
