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mirror
Betrayal...
breaking of
the beautiful mirror
and falling on the floor
to become a sharp weapon..,
which can shed anyone's blood...
breaking of
the beautiful mirror
and falling on the floor
to become a sharp weapon..,
which can shed anyone's blood...
Published 17th Aug 2023
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17th Aug 2023 12:08pm
17th Aug 2023 12:38pm
17th Aug 2023 12:19pm
this is great.
Very true, and very well written.
i love it.
it captures every feeling i get whenever
i see the people who have betrayed me.
Very true, and very well written.
i love it.
it captures every feeling i get whenever
i see the people who have betrayed me.
17th Aug 2023 12:42pm
18th Aug 2023 2:20am
18th Aug 2023 7:49am
18th Aug 2023 8:14am
18th Aug 2023 2:04pm
Dear D,
This is so painfully accurate. Betrayal is such a gut wrenching experience. I like how you’ve used the mirror shard as a weapon. Hmmmm, I’m thinking….
Sad subject, great writing. H🌷
This is so painfully accurate. Betrayal is such a gut wrenching experience. I like how you’ve used the mirror shard as a weapon. Hmmmm, I’m thinking….
Sad subject, great writing. H🌷
18th Aug 2023 3:53pm
Anonymous
20th Aug 2023 6:02pm
Powerful poem...
So few words ...so heavy an impact
So few words ...so heavy an impact
20th Aug 2023 6:28pm
