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Echoes of Fate: A Dreamer's Warning
In realms surreal, I find my gaze,
Dreams unfurl, an enigmatic phase.
A warning whispered through the night,
Deception's web, woven tight.
I Confined you like fleeting fireflies,
In a glass jar, under moonlit skies.
Actions taken, sealing fates,
A reckoning awaits, as darkness abates.
One, two, the cosmic threads align,
Karma's dance, a fate divine.
Through twists of time, it journeys true,
Seeking justice for deeds undue.
One, then two, the steps of fate,
Karma's path, it's not too late.
A reckoning, in shadows cast,
Destiny arrives, coming for you.
Dreams unfurl, an enigmatic phase.
A warning whispered through the night,
Deception's web, woven tight.
I Confined you like fleeting fireflies,
In a glass jar, under moonlit skies.
Actions taken, sealing fates,
A reckoning awaits, as darkness abates.
One, two, the cosmic threads align,
Karma's dance, a fate divine.
Through twists of time, it journeys true,
Seeking justice for deeds undue.
One, then two, the steps of fate,
Karma's path, it's not too late.
A reckoning, in shadows cast,
Destiny arrives, coming for you.
Published 16th Aug 2023
Author's Note
Feels like a movie
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17th Aug 2023 4:01am
Dear K,
What goes around comes around is what this makes me think. I always wonder if those who inflict trauma on another will be aware the karma retuning on them. I like the formatting and the pacing of your poem. It’s always so gentle, strong but gentle.
H🌷
What goes around comes around is what this makes me think. I always wonder if those who inflict trauma on another will be aware the karma retuning on them. I like the formatting and the pacing of your poem. It’s always so gentle, strong but gentle.
H🌷
17th Aug 2023 5:06am
