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Lonely
Lonely thinking
Voids and holes
You‘re boring, don’t deserve it to be loved
Lonely sleeping
Lonely soul
Seventeen, how can you still be alone?
Talking, whispers
Stories told
Full of shame standing in the cold
Listening, thinking
Crying after
Wish a kiss, a hug,
Somebody to hold
Voids and holes
You‘re boring, don’t deserve it to be loved
Lonely sleeping
Lonely soul
Seventeen, how can you still be alone?
Talking, whispers
Stories told
Full of shame standing in the cold
Listening, thinking
Crying after
Wish a kiss, a hug,
Somebody to hold
Published 16th Aug 2023
Author's Note
Found this in my drafts, I like the melody of it
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16th Aug 2023 10:39am
Sometimes lonely has a voice through the voids, to me this was a fine write, there are many challenges in life and love.
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17th Aug 2023 9:02pm
you’re a beautiful idiot & i know it’s hard, but you are made for everything you want, you know that? you’re a smart ass hustler, and deep down you know exactly that i’m in the right and you deserve everything that you think you don’t. don’t be stupid, don’t fool yourself. be yourself!! i love you for the way you are, silly…
