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The Sea
Next to the sea means under the water
Drowning in tears of screaming and hate
Feeling the breeze of cold pushing harder
We came here united, will we leave changed?
Higher walls of waves paving the way
Seagulls are lurking to eat what we can’t
The stars are cloudy, the nights are strange
If I would leave now, tell me would you stay?
Drowning in tears of screaming and hate
Feeling the breeze of cold pushing harder
We came here united, will we leave changed?
Higher walls of waves paving the way
Seagulls are lurking to eat what we can’t
The stars are cloudy, the nights are strange
If I would leave now, tell me would you stay?
Published 16th Aug 2023
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4th Sep 2023 9:24pm
Having lived by the sea for 13+ years, I feel drawn into your poem from the first line all the way through to the surprising question at the end.
Well captured moment.
Well captured moment.
