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humiliation
‘she went from room to room’ she says,
laughing a bit with her phone in her hand,
the viral video playing,
‘fucking each of them in turn.’
she points at the screen and talks about how
they’ve lined up with their buttocks out,
encouraging her to eat them.
50 soldiers on
a 20-something girl…
you think ‘you’re such a prude,
it might be her kink after all…’
but somehow you keep picturing a doe
that once would have trembled to know
what lay in store for it
or a girl who was trained
to find pleasure in pain
laughing a bit with her phone in her hand,
the viral video playing,
‘fucking each of them in turn.’
she points at the screen and talks about how
they’ve lined up with their buttocks out,
encouraging her to eat them.
50 soldiers on
a 20-something girl…
you think ‘you’re such a prude,
it might be her kink after all…’
but somehow you keep picturing a doe
that once would have trembled to know
what lay in store for it
or a girl who was trained
to find pleasure in pain
Published 14th Aug 2023
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15th Aug 2023 3:48pm
Human trafficking is absolutely atrocious. Especially when young children are involved.
The fifth stanza brings one to a stop. The imagery is impeccable.
The fifth stanza brings one to a stop. The imagery is impeccable.
15th Aug 2023 4:02pm
Thank you! I sort of cribbed that from a line in Lolita: “Try to discern the doe in me.”
26th Aug 2023 2:28am
I was totally picking up what you were laying down. Nicely done even with this type of topic. Its a shame this shits actually exists. 3
