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Making Soft Music
His heat rested firm against my cheek.
I wondered if he felt my breath.
My hand drifted across his scrotum to
smooth skin below where my piano fingers
played part of a childhood song.
I softly sang, “falling down, falling down,”
as the tips of my fingers tapped lightly.
I wondered if he knew the melody.
I wondered if he felt my breath.
My hand drifted across his scrotum to
smooth skin below where my piano fingers
played part of a childhood song.
I softly sang, “falling down, falling down,”
as the tips of my fingers tapped lightly.
I wondered if he knew the melody.
Published 10th Aug 2023
Author's Note
More lines inspired by time with my new love.
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10th Aug 2023 3:02pm
Your poem is gorgeous and sensual
You prompted me to answer a poem from my fantasies for your writing
Make soft music
I put my lips on your cheek.
I feel your breath quickening.
Your hand drifted between your thighs
Your fingers wander between the dampness of your crevice
Your fingers play the tunes of lust.
You sing softly, "Break in, break in,"
As you gently sink your fingers inside you.
They wonder if I feel your dance.
You prompted me to answer a poem from my fantasies for your writing
Make soft music
I put my lips on your cheek.
I feel your breath quickening.
Your hand drifted between your thighs
Your fingers wander between the dampness of your crevice
Your fingers play the tunes of lust.
You sing softly, "Break in, break in,"
As you gently sink your fingers inside you.
They wonder if I feel your dance.
11th Aug 2023 5:23am
Set me on fire, why don't you. Soft music and Loud music is hot. Keep on writing.
'Making Soft Music' on the soft parts. If this was foreplay shouldn't the melody have been something about 'rising up'? (Just joking LOL)
Was that melody part of the English nursery rhyme "London Bridge is falling down"? (The previous version of the real London Bridge, I realise is now in Arizona.)
Last line makes one ponder if childhood rhymes ever go out of fashion over years (in England answer might be no, considering how many generations some have endured).
Was that melody part of the English nursery rhyme "London Bridge is falling down"? (The previous version of the real London Bridge, I realise is now in Arizona.)
Last line makes one ponder if childhood rhymes ever go out of fashion over years (in England answer might be no, considering how many generations some have endured).
12th Aug 2023 1:50pm
Music is the pillow of the sensual cello lusting a mellow dream sweeping the angel's dust into one's memories to save for tea and symphony.
