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Common Sense
…isn’t common to me.
I once ordered a BLT
and on tucking in
saw that it was just LT.
So when I said,
the guy that was left
made me a sandwich
so stuffed with B
that it was like Sheol for pigs,
my mouth. And I got the meat sweats
for my afternoon shift
not thinking I could wrap one half
and put it in the fridge.
My brain’s like that.
About as impulsive
and reckless as God’s.
I once ordered a BLT
and on tucking in
saw that it was just LT.
So when I said,
the guy that was left
made me a sandwich
so stuffed with B
that it was like Sheol for pigs,
my mouth. And I got the meat sweats
for my afternoon shift
not thinking I could wrap one half
and put it in the fridge.
My brain’s like that.
About as impulsive
and reckless as God’s.
Published 6th Aug 2023
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6th Aug 2023 9:53pm
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7th Aug 2023 1:14pm
And of all the meat you could eat too much of, pork is the WORST! Same for a Saturnian lesson; it's not one too soon forgotten. :)
