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Fragmented
Something's shattered; the doctor can't mend,
Hearts left tattered, unable to ascend.
Dreams scattered, like stars in the night,
Hopes battered, seeking rays of light.
Memories shattered, like glass on the floor,
Love tattered, the pain we can't ignore.
Life's patterned, with struggles to transcend,
Something's shattered; the doctor can't mend.
Hearts left tattered, unable to ascend.
Dreams scattered, like stars in the night,
Hopes battered, seeking rays of light.
Memories shattered, like glass on the floor,
Love tattered, the pain we can't ignore.
Life's patterned, with struggles to transcend,
Something's shattered; the doctor can't mend.
Published 5th Aug 2023
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Anonymous
5th Sep 2023 6:17am
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21st Oct 2023 5:07am
The cadence of the poem but I was unable to grasp the meaning. I thought it was about being broken but I am not entirely sure.
21st Oct 2023 5:15am
Thank you for your feedback, it is scattered yes, but then isn't all thought in pain?
26th Oct 2023 4:44am
