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To Stand In Shoes Like Those
Trust me, Babe. This
portrait you
posed for truly
is beautiful. It's just
I do not understand
how any woman would
be able to stand in shoes like those.
portrait you
posed for truly
is beautiful. It's just
I do not understand
how any woman would
be able to stand in shoes like those.
Published 2nd Aug 2023
Author's Note
In this komo poem, one half of a couple tells the other half that her portrait is perfect... except for one thing.
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2nd Aug 2023 1:30pm
It’s difficult.
It’s not difficult to like this piece though. I find it to be adoring and lovely with some practicality thrown in.
It’s not difficult to like this piece though. I find it to be adoring and lovely with some practicality thrown in.
2nd Aug 2023 8:20pm
2nd Aug 2023 2:04pm
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