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A True Heart's Proposal
timbre
of my
heart
is romantic
and
true
in the
frequency
of love
i am
on bended
knče
disclosing
what's in
my soul
in a
field
of roses
under
a summer
sky
saying
i love you
beautiful
of my
heart
is romantic
and
true
in the
frequency
of love
i am
on bended
knče
disclosing
what's in
my soul
in a
field
of roses
under
a summer
sky
saying
i love you
beautiful
Published 29th Jul 2023
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29th Jul 2023 12:52pm
sigh....
Swoony swoon.
It's always a enormous pleasure to read your romantic side, my dear friend.
I think sometimes writer's who beat certain drums over and over again, become stale and often predictable within their comfort zones of form or similar themes. Yet, with your work, it always feels like an honest and real reflection of your diverse emotional thought and being. Your style, albeit mostly uncontrollable, from what you've described to me over the years, is never one note and absolutely never, ever boring. You deliver a wide range of poetic truths, styles and content that keep me coming back to read over and over....
Thank you for sharing your experiences, your heart and your abundant talent with us. It's made me a far better writer and overall human.
-💙
Swoony swoon.
It's always a enormous pleasure to read your romantic side, my dear friend.
I think sometimes writer's who beat certain drums over and over again, become stale and often predictable within their comfort zones of form or similar themes. Yet, with your work, it always feels like an honest and real reflection of your diverse emotional thought and being. Your style, albeit mostly uncontrollable, from what you've described to me over the years, is never one note and absolutely never, ever boring. You deliver a wide range of poetic truths, styles and content that keep me coming back to read over and over....
Thank you for sharing your experiences, your heart and your abundant talent with us. It's made me a far better writer and overall human.
-💙
29th Jul 2023 12:58pm
29th Jul 2023 1:06pm
3rd Aug 2023 2:33pm
You bring a smile to my face as I read this. I think your poem made a good statement in that alone :) A simple message delivered reverently
