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TAKE ME HOME
"I didn't come here for love,I came to dance!"
She tells him, eyeing his lips with a salacious smile
Suggesting "more," perhaps?
He sweeps her to the floor
And as they sway to Afro beats his hood ramming against her booty
Fluids rhyming the eroticism of the heavy drumming and lyrics trickles with every glide!
Searching his face amongst the disappearing flashes of party lights
"Take me home." Breathless,she murmurs.Almost begging."My body is ravaged!"
From all the buzz? "desire," perhaps?!
She tells him, eyeing his lips with a salacious smile
Suggesting "more," perhaps?
He sweeps her to the floor
And as they sway to Afro beats his hood ramming against her booty
Fluids rhyming the eroticism of the heavy drumming and lyrics trickles with every glide!
Searching his face amongst the disappearing flashes of party lights
"Take me home." Breathless,she murmurs.Almost begging."My body is ravaged!"
From all the buzz? "desire," perhaps?!
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Re. TAKE ME HOME
27th Jul 2023 2:59pm
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27th Jul 2023 4:07pm
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27th Jul 2023 3:23pm
Wow! Freshas Night (Freshman disco night). I got agirl, now an-Ex., It was exactly this sweet and brief.
Thank you for the crisp capture.
Thank you for the crisp capture.
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27th Jul 2023 4:08pm
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27th Jul 2023 8:24pm
Couldn't he have taken her home first then done all that? I would be tempted to ask...
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31st Jul 2023 2:41pm
Hahaha!Stroke the fire before it smokes,huh?! I like your style Mr.Song~
Well,perhaps they became acquainted in the club?
Well,perhaps they became acquainted in the club?
Re: Re. TAKE ME HOME
31st Jul 2023 6:45pm
I concede that poet Robert Frost did first call dancing "the vertical expression of the horizontal desire"! It looks as if the couple enacted their horizontal desire vertically!
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