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THE EXTENSION OF YOUR SOUL (2)
The extension of your soul
moves within me, as we roll
bare amidst the satin sheets.
Your teeth nibble at my teats
pulling at them teasingly
while your arms so squeezingly
draw me irrevocably
caught up in a reverie,
imprinting my front on your
torso so I can't withdraw
what I chose to give to you.
I am moaning "Ah, ma Dieux....
oh, sweet mercy.." endlessly
as you thrust in-out of me.
Then, the earth begins to move
within my contracting groove.
Your pearl stream fills my chasm
as I enter orgasm,
rising celestial heights,
let go my scratching and bites.
Your body ceases pressing,
you tail off while caressing
my back, having allowed me
to rest upon your body.
moves within me, as we roll
bare amidst the satin sheets.
Your teeth nibble at my teats
pulling at them teasingly
while your arms so squeezingly
draw me irrevocably
caught up in a reverie,
imprinting my front on your
torso so I can't withdraw
what I chose to give to you.
I am moaning "Ah, ma Dieux....
oh, sweet mercy.." endlessly
as you thrust in-out of me.
Then, the earth begins to move
within my contracting groove.
Your pearl stream fills my chasm
as I enter orgasm,
rising celestial heights,
let go my scratching and bites.
Your body ceases pressing,
you tail off while caressing
my back, having allowed me
to rest upon your body.
Published 19th Jul 2023
| Edited 25th Aug 2023
Author's Note
The phrase prompt "extension of your soul" was a euphemism picked up from one of SKC5's earlier erotic poems. It was also the title and first line of an earlier and shorter poem I wrote inspired by her work.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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19th Jul 2023 12:45pm
I like the images your poem brings up in my mind and the free form of this.
I'm still in recovery and am thankful for your kind comments first to my mother and then me. I'm hoping to read and write more now that I am better.
I'm still in recovery and am thankful for your kind comments first to my mother and then me. I'm hoping to read and write more now that I am better.
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- Edited 28th Mar 2025 1:50am
19th Jul 2023 8:17pm
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24th Jul 2023 5:38am
After reading your rendition, a very beautiful poetic extension was birthed into play, and an enticing collage of words to mentally allure the eyes.
Thank you for allowing my words to be the blessing of yours.
Have a magnificent week.
Thank you for allowing my words to be the blessing of yours.
Have a magnificent week.
25th Aug 2023 6:18pm
This speaks volumes !! Its very deep. I like it... im just not good w words sometimes but very good.
