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Two Rivers (rough draft practice)

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Two rivers I can see them winding
Down the street, two heartbeats are rising
with the sun, fuckin up the sheets
not surprising  
When the souls meet, cups of tea
and a little green smoke keeps the signals flying
But he's deep in her eyes
and the look that she keeps is the whole damn horizon
Two rivers that reflect the light when, ground meets sky
through their precious lightning,
and the feeling keeps repeating as she pulls his mind in
Still no touch
while their psyches  
bucking and grinding  
stuck with a might be
tucked in the lining  
Two rivers and they keep combining  
Pools deep with love, that they keep on finding
ain't really that deep
So where the water greets them's
surprising
And they pour their lies in
cause they're bored of trying...
Written by beanbandit (Unfate the death shaman)
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Author's Note
I put the link up top to youtube cause i couldnt figure out how to upload a short to here, and youtube wont let me save it as a full video. This is still incomplete but i figure id put some of my process up here. I did the draft video to help out the rhyme, but it's still only half.
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