Earthquake

This poem is absolutely incredible in how it portrays the intense power of pain and heartbreak. It really makes you feel vulnerable and completely broken, but somehow, amidst all the devastation, there is a sort of beauty that shines through. It's like the broken pieces of a heart turn into these shimmering crystals. Your words really strike a chord and remind us of the resilience we have, even when faced with unimaginable devastation.

You understood what I was trying to convey perfectly. Thank you for the nice comments.

Great job with this one... nice tight rhyming... excellent flow...

Thank you my friend. 🌻

Ugh, this feeling, it sucks unwashed balls. I’m sorry you had the inspiration, because it suuuuucccks.

But you poured your pain out beautifully, and incorporated your nature tropes in a way that showed storms and fractures.

Sometimes to read beautiful requires gut wrenching pain. Thank you for you comments and always supporting me. 💜

Sometimes the rocks that we stand on turn to sand leaving us to wonder, how full is the pail of man? Really like this, my friend.  

I feel like there are little earthquakes in my heart and they crumble parts of me. But they will not destroy me. Thank you for checking out.

I like the way this is written.

Thank you!!