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what i want pt 2
I type and I text how I want your body near
I tell you each day I wish you were here
We write what we could do together
Imagining a passion that would last forever
But is it just me that wants it
I can't tell how you feel not a bit
Because you say nothing not even a me too
I try and try but I can't read you
Do you like me, do you want me
Or am I alone with my feelings?
I tell you each day I wish you were here
We write what we could do together
Imagining a passion that would last forever
But is it just me that wants it
I can't tell how you feel not a bit
Because you say nothing not even a me too
I try and try but I can't read you
Do you like me, do you want me
Or am I alone with my feelings?
Published 18th Apr 2012
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19th Apr 2012 4:23pm
He's actually not on du. But when I get some feedback from him I'll post. Ty for your comment :)
19th Apr 2012 10:16pm
Oh you don't need to post the feedback. I just found in odd that you have expressed the interest and he hasn't responded one way or the other.
21st Apr 2012 3:24am
