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Harmony In Waiting
My soul in search of peaceful splendor.
As I look into the abyss I find a calm come over me I did not know existed.
My memories are borrowed from a life that belongs to an extrovert to whom there is a guarantee of popular opinion.
If a secret is kept it is denied immortality.
Somebody feels the same way you do which means you can never truly be original.
As I look into the abyss I find a calm come over me I did not know existed.
My memories are borrowed from a life that belongs to an extrovert to whom there is a guarantee of popular opinion.
If a secret is kept it is denied immortality.
Somebody feels the same way you do which means you can never truly be original.
Published 6th Jul 2023
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6th Jul 2023 11:43am
Great job! This really made me think. First two lines I loved.
Last line packs a jab at a truth. I do believe collective beliefs can be positive as well.
Keep going!!!!
Last line packs a jab at a truth. I do believe collective beliefs can be positive as well.
Keep going!!!!
6th Jul 2023 7:36pm
I appreciate that. My confidence is definitely growing with each new poem.
6th Jul 2023 10:01pm
I enjoyed your poem very much. The first line is captivating and pulled me in. I would have liked it to be a bit longer.
Well done.
Well done.
6th Jul 2023 10:04pm
Thanks very much. My work tends to be shorter simply because I don't have the cardio for a longer piece just yet. However, with more writing I believe you will see more of a story in what I write.
6th Jul 2023 10:05pm
15th Jul 2023 8:52am
Awesome writing here! :) Great job expressing the feelings, the emotion. It is impossible to read this and not feel it touch "the reader's" very core and soul. Kudos and keep writing. You got good stuff.
