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Why Did I
It has been
A long
Long time
Since I've Been in
The monkey minded
Point of view
I often wonder
Sometimes
Could I go back
Leaving behind
Burning all
The thing's
That I have Learned
When I watch
The monkey minded people
Looking happy
I often wonder sometimes
Why
Did I
Teach my ignorance
To Think
A long
Long time
Since I've Been in
The monkey minded
Point of view
I often wonder
Sometimes
Could I go back
Leaving behind
Burning all
The thing's
That I have Learned
When I watch
The monkey minded people
Looking happy
I often wonder sometimes
Why
Did I
Teach my ignorance
To Think
Published 29th Jun 2023
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29th Jun 2023 6:33pm
I think this is a great piece because you wrote it in such a way that people of many different backgrounds can relate to it. My initial thought was of drug addiction, but it can apply to drug, alcohol, political minded. I like it.
30th Jun 2023 12:20pm
