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Walk on Water
I can remember
different conversations
I had with my
Father
* * *
How such things
seem
to become
Omens of the
Future
* * *
I often walk on the water of the past-present-future
different conversations
I had with my
Father
* * *
How such things
seem
to become
Omens of the
Future
* * *
I often walk on the water of the past-present-future
Published 25th Jun 2023
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25th Jun 2023 7:42pm
Our past conversations have such a profound effect on us
when they come from someone we love but also admire and respect.
Great piece amigo:)
when they come from someone we love but also admire and respect.
Great piece amigo:)
26th Jun 2023 5:40am
I hear you, in such a profound way.
I think when they're no longer with us, looking back upon those conversations becomes almost time travel... not knowing then, just how poignant and meaningful they'd be in the now.
Thank you for articulating your thoughts in at fantastically succinct way.
Excellent poeting here.
🌹
I think when they're no longer with us, looking back upon those conversations becomes almost time travel... not knowing then, just how poignant and meaningful they'd be in the now.
Thank you for articulating your thoughts in at fantastically succinct way.
Excellent poeting here.
🌹
