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Respite
The guards have left to sleep for the night.
Halls dark and quiet,
The echo of rain gently tapping.
These walls of cobble harbor life,
And beckon for all to join.
It is the perfect night.
Halls dark and quiet,
The echo of rain gently tapping.
These walls of cobble harbor life,
And beckon for all to join.
It is the perfect night.
Published 17th Jun 2023
| Edited 18th Jun 2023
Author's Note
Sometimes I feel I add too much to my poems. Too many “and”s & “but”s. I tried to keep this short. Sometimes that all you really need.
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17th Jun 2023 11:41pm
Well this is an excellent example of a lot accomplished even with brevity. The beginning is strong and builds the foundation for the continued strength throughout.
Well written, Koulouri.
Well written, Koulouri.
18th Jun 2023 2:28am
Thank you! I always put a lot of thought into every word in my poems so it brings me much joy when others acknowledge or even praise my work 😁
