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Adultry So Wrong?
Beating as I write this
I want to slide into you
Feel the stiffness of my member
Fucking so right and true
Not caring what zealots are saying
About sex before tying the knot
For how successful can marriage be
If you have no idea what you have got
Is the spouse one who tires never
Wanting more then you can do
Or a wallflower so rigid
Leaving you frustrated, sad and blue?
So just let us ride erotic splendor
Fuck maniacs if you like
Start it with a soft word
Now that skirt you need to hike
I want to slide into you
Feel the stiffness of my member
Fucking so right and true
Not caring what zealots are saying
About sex before tying the knot
For how successful can marriage be
If you have no idea what you have got
Is the spouse one who tires never
Wanting more then you can do
Or a wallflower so rigid
Leaving you frustrated, sad and blue?
So just let us ride erotic splendor
Fuck maniacs if you like
Start it with a soft word
Now that skirt you need to hike
Published 17th Apr 2012
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Anonymous
17th Apr 2012 00:31am
but do not reflect the necessity of sowing your DNA or wild oats .....adultery is actually a natural urge.....and to have a commandment FORBIDDING IT...is like making people vow to CELIBACY all their lives...RIDICULOUS...
I liked your poem
my 2 cents
Kitty
I liked your poem
my 2 cents
Kitty
17th Apr 2012 00:43am
Well as you know adultery was part of mosaic law, which the Jews weren't able to maintain. I was always in admiration of Paul McCartney as he was the only Beatle that didn't wind up getting divorced to his first wife. Sadly I think he made a bad choice on the second one!
30th May 2019 1:17pm
Sounds like we're hittn fornication, not adultery, since it is before marriage
But I agree wholeheartedly that sexual compatibility must be known beforehand since wives can now say "no" and the husband has no legal recourse
But I agree wholeheartedly that sexual compatibility must be known beforehand since wives can now say "no" and the husband has no legal recourse
30th May 2019 2:17pm
No argument here. My clumsy effort here was rather then being bogged down in semantics we would could spend the time on more crucial issues, like a healthy planet or the injustice we direct towards our fellow humans while some regions of the country don’t even want to educate students about the way their bodies work.
