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Beautiful Catastrophe
Pleasure seems only recognizable
after breeching the membrane of pain.
We were a beautiful catastrophe.
Sun after slashing rain.
Questioned by the sane.
Velvet and volatile.
Looking back at the stretches
of blackened miles.
At all our infinite tries.
A sunrise and sunset were never destined to occur together.
You are my painful, passionate chance at never......
after breeching the membrane of pain.
We were a beautiful catastrophe.
Sun after slashing rain.
Questioned by the sane.
Velvet and volatile.
Looking back at the stretches
of blackened miles.
At all our infinite tries.
A sunrise and sunset were never destined to occur together.
You are my painful, passionate chance at never......
Published 13th Jun 2023
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13th Jun 2023 12:02pm
13th Jun 2023 12:08pm
I'm glad you were touched by it.
It's loosely based on my ex husband.
Which the poem should have just been called Catastrophe, lol
It's loosely based on my ex husband.
Which the poem should have just been called Catastrophe, lol
13th Jun 2023 1:32pm
I love that poetry allows us this kind of portal that allows us to be able to look back at situations and people with a more mature lens. I think the whole concept of the beautiful catastrophe lends itself beautifully to the theme and the subject of this poem. Yeah. Happy sigh.
Thanks for sharing
-M
Thanks for sharing
-M
13th Jun 2023 2:20pm
Hi! Thanks so much for your lovely comment. The phrase popped in my head. And I thought wait a minute, this could be my marriage, lol. That thankfully is over.
Enjoy your day 😊
Enjoy your day 😊
13th Jun 2023 2:08pm
13th Jun 2023 2:21pm
14th Jun 2023 2:57am
I like how you used metaphors in this. It comes off as an original way to depict emotion and meaning, in the way you use them. There is a seeming balance and duality about them as well. Anyway, thanks for sharing.
14th Jun 2023 9:57am
Thanks so much. Kinda popped in my head, this poem. But it does describe a few relationships of mine.
As always thx for comments and checking it out.
As always thx for comments and checking it out.
16th Jun 2023 5:38pm
Missy said it. But for me it’s a heavy sigh, because that shit still hurts to look back on.
“A sunrise and sunset were never destined to occur together.”
Oh balls, that’s fantastic imagery. I loved that line so damn much. Great piece lovely.
“A sunrise and sunset were never destined to occur together.”
Oh balls, that’s fantastic imagery. I loved that line so damn much. Great piece lovely.
16th Jun 2023 6:55pm
Hi! Aww, thank you. I like that line too.
It means so much to me when you check out my writing. 💜
It means so much to me when you check out my writing. 💜
