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Carmine
I pity the ones
wearing heart
shaped glasses
not knowing
the origin
of bursted
cherries,
how fury
lies beneath
red coloured
plastic.
Published 10th Jun 2023
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10th Jun 2023 12:29pm
10th Jun 2023 7:30pm
Good old Red.. versatile hue.... baptised in fire,
Great read, as always
Regards,
BITS
Great read, as always
Regards,
BITS
11th Jun 2023 10:56am
Dear N,
For me, this piece makes me think of young love and all the prospects that are ahead. Then reality and experience set in and fate takes hold the rest of the story. I love the image of heart shaped glasses and how they summon the wearer while hiding truths. Such a great write. H🌷
For me, this piece makes me think of young love and all the prospects that are ahead. Then reality and experience set in and fate takes hold the rest of the story. I love the image of heart shaped glasses and how they summon the wearer while hiding truths. Such a great write. H🌷
