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Pilgrimage
Towards hell
all trips
are fast and geometric,
either on a highway
or by stairways.
Towards hell
all songs
lose their function
to be a soundtrack,
background music
or elevator music.
PAR
all trips
are fast and geometric,
either on a highway
or by stairways.
Towards hell
all songs
lose their function
to be a soundtrack,
background music
or elevator music.
PAR
Published 5th Jun 2023
| Edited 14th Jun 2023
Author's Note
After losing some weight it shows a new body... (25 words)
Pilgrimages
Towards hell
all trips
fast and geometric,
either by highway
or stairways.
Towards hell
all songs
lose their function
soundtrack,
background music
elevator music.
PAR
Pilgrimages
Towards hell
all trips
fast and geometric,
either by highway
or stairways.
Towards hell
all songs
lose their function
soundtrack,
background music
elevator music.
PAR
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6th Jun 2023 2:42am
This was a fucking gorgeous way to describe anxiety.
You are flying to hell with shitty music. It's perfect, and the momentum of the piece was executed flawlessly.
6th Jun 2023 9:12am
7th Jun 2023 1:13pm
For some reason, this spoke to me this morning, especially the feeling of all songs losing their function.
7th Jun 2023 2:09pm
Very nice poem.
This poem does not conjures up the forces of darkness,...
... but the darkness imagines the verses, that's why this poem has been written....
... ... ...
This poem does not conjures up the forces of darkness,...
... but the darkness imagines the verses, that's why this poem has been written....
... ... ...
9th Jun 2023 5:10pm
10th Jun 2023 00:00am
9th Jun 2023 9:01pm
The succinct and powerful imagery here has a complex and very human and resonant emotion.
9th Jun 2023 9:09pm
9th Jun 2023 9:18pm
