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He helped
I clean
my
crimson shades
petals
with my
finger tips,
today
he helped me
with thunder shakes
n i thanked him
by grabbing
and soaking
his manhood
my
crimson shades
petals
with my
finger tips,
today
he helped me
with thunder shakes
n i thanked him
by grabbing
and soaking
his manhood
Published 4th Jun 2023
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Could giggle at the imagery of the session, like particularly the lines:
he helped me
with thunder shakes
n i thanked him
by grabbing
and soaking
his manhood
he helped me
with thunder shakes
n i thanked him
by grabbing
and soaking
his manhood
4th Jun 2023 1:26pm
4th Jun 2023 7:45pm
It was the raw vividness of the description that struck me rather than anything to laugh at.
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- Edited 28th Mar 2024 6:45pm
9th Jun 2023 12:33pm
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9th Jun 2023 12:38pm
10th Jun 2023 2:22pm
The adjectives used are very effective and vivid;
"crimson shades"
"thunder shakes"
"crimson shades"
"thunder shakes"
10th Jun 2023 2:51pm
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