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whispers of love
Your scent is coconut
and exotic
your breasts are rounded and formed
as i squeeze your nipples tendely
and whisper
a thousand love words
into your clitoris ear
and exotic
your breasts are rounded and formed
as i squeeze your nipples tendely
and whisper
a thousand love words
into your clitoris ear
Published 15th Apr 2012
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15th Apr 2012 11:31am
That's some great imagery and metaphor there. At first I wasn't sure what you meant by clitoris ear, but a second later twigged. I think maybe this poem could be a bit longer though - perhaps expand on the desires you're whispering.
15th Apr 2012 9:18pm
4th Nov 2014 6:20am
Time was when I could make her dance
with a little slip of the tongue and a turn of a phrase
with a little slip of the tongue and a turn of a phrase
