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Lots of things suck
Long nails and heat
Sticky honey on your fingertips
Flowers dying
The wind blowing so hard
You can barely breathe
Life in general
Life can suck
It seems sweet
But then takes all your loved ones away
Leaves you in the dust
Not once looking back
Maybe I'm being emotional
But I have reasons to feel
And I feel ruthless
And horrified
And exhausted
Tell me one more time
I'm being dramatic
And I will snap
I will fight
And hit
And bleed
Until you can feel, hear, see, taste
The pain and anger
Feel it deep in your bones
Then we'll see whose being dramatic
Written by moony_
Published | Edited 2nd Jan 2024
Author's Note
People leave all the time, and I couldn't take it anymore. So I screamed this poem in my car till my lungs burned and my eyes were swollen and red.
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