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Sails of Stones
On the sails of stones in the forest
of nature's granite waterfall gardens
embracing the pastoral imagery
in the corridors between the trees
for the midnight wanderers
as piccolos whistle spiritual winds
of nature's granite waterfall gardens
embracing the pastoral imagery
in the corridors between the trees
for the midnight wanderers
as piccolos whistle spiritual winds
Published 12th May 2023
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12th May 2023 4:54am
Very peaceful imagery and metaphor. I like the building transition. To me, you almost "simplified" your often esoteric style, but it makes for a concise, clean, and tidy read. Still, very nice use of original language. Thanks for sharing.
12th May 2023 6:09am
