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Dark's Little Privy
In the land of Sodom where I was shorn
beneath the cobwebs and chandeliers
a thousand hounds of darkened souls
with fat tongues swollen like clams
laying me down in my gothic antebellum
of an aquarium's swollen escargot
in a dark little privy, thinking it Zorro
beneath the cobwebs and chandeliers
a thousand hounds of darkened souls
with fat tongues swollen like clams
laying me down in my gothic antebellum
of an aquarium's swollen escargot
in a dark little privy, thinking it Zorro
Published 10th May 2023
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10th May 2023 6:34pm
This sounds like an insidious gruesome fate.
I enjoy your dark poetry as well as the lighter stuff.
I enjoy your dark poetry as well as the lighter stuff.
10th May 2023 6:37pm
10th May 2023 8:14pm
I know it's like I repeat myself, but again, your language and metaphors are entirely original. How you squeeze the meanings of the words together so concisely in a seemingly abstract way here is great. Thanks for sharing.
10th May 2023 8:59pm
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