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defenseless
each line she spoke
helped break me,
her emotions
did not match
my own.
her words, hurtful
in their simplicity
have cut me deeper
than any sharp blade
i have drug across
my flesh.
helped break me,
her emotions
did not match
my own.
her words, hurtful
in their simplicity
have cut me deeper
than any sharp blade
i have drug across
my flesh.
Published 9th May 2023
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this is just a work of fiction
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14th May 2023 2:11am
Dear J,
Excellent description of hurt and rejection. I’m glad it’s a work of fiction.
Relatable though. H🌷
Excellent description of hurt and rejection. I’m glad it’s a work of fiction.
Relatable though. H🌷
14th May 2023 2:55am
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