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fish melted
sunny day n
sunday
autumn n
alone we are
n a lonely beach...
his dry sensations
became wet
he said..
two flowers
have blossomed in this autumn.
"Awwwwww
this is amazing mammilla"
When saw me
in wet white fabric
his eyes staring
at pink popped skin..
We fell in the water
N lost in the waves of ecstasy.
N the silver coloured fish melted from the heat..
sunday
autumn n
alone we are
n a lonely beach...
his dry sensations
became wet
he said..
two flowers
have blossomed in this autumn.
"Awwwwww
this is amazing mammilla"
When saw me
in wet white fabric
his eyes staring
at pink popped skin..
We fell in the water
N lost in the waves of ecstasy.
N the silver coloured fish melted from the heat..
Published 4th May 2023
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Anonymous
4th May 2023 4:01pm
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4th May 2023 4:04pm
Hey there
Thanks so much for your beautiful comment n including my stuff in your RL. I'm glad that you liked my write up!
Thanks so much for your beautiful comment n including my stuff in your RL. I'm glad that you liked my write up!
4th May 2023 5:21pm
Hoi hoi
Here’s the fanclub again.
I’m a vegetarian since I was 13, but I won’t hold the melting fish against you. The idea alone would smell awful, or is that part of my imagination?
Truly wonderful write!!!
Thank you!
Kind regards, Gus
Here’s the fanclub again.
I’m a vegetarian since I was 13, but I won’t hold the melting fish against you. The idea alone would smell awful, or is that part of my imagination?
Truly wonderful write!!!
Thank you!
Kind regards, Gus
4th May 2023 5:40pm
Hey you
Thank You so much for reading and responding! Yaaay it may be a part of your imagination ha ha.. well I'm thankful to you for your beautiful comment!
Thank You so much for reading and responding! Yaaay it may be a part of your imagination ha ha.. well I'm thankful to you for your beautiful comment!
4th May 2023 6:33pm
4th May 2023 6:47pm
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- Edited 2nd Jul 2023 5:45pm
4th May 2023 6:54pm
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4th May 2023 6:57pm
6th May 2023 3:37am
He saw you in wet fabric and his attention grew. This made him horny and he took right then and there to paradise. Keep on writing.
6th May 2023 3:54am
Awww yaaaa
Welll thank you for reading n Keep continue reading like this to me and let me know if you have any suggestions about my writing. Once again thanks!
Welll thank you for reading n Keep continue reading like this to me and let me know if you have any suggestions about my writing. Once again thanks!
