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short jean sky
short jean sky
midnight nail polish
of iron-dark waves
on Delphic tides
an oracular waxing
deep in pentacles
of tarot queen
whose thunder
is an ivory storm
like the ribboned muscles
of a snow leopard on the prowl
seen through denim cracks
of Tibetan cirrus
midnight nail polish
of iron-dark waves
on Delphic tides
an oracular waxing
deep in pentacles
of tarot queen
whose thunder
is an ivory storm
like the ribboned muscles
of a snow leopard on the prowl
seen through denim cracks
of Tibetan cirrus
Published 4th May 2023
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4th May 2023 5:59am
My lovely,
This is a true feast for the senses... like stumbling onto a fun filled carnival of descriptive delights!!
Your batista of choice surely inspires in such a rich and heady way ... I love the snow leopard reference—it's perfectly sensual and part of the reason the poem leads one on a fantastical thought journey, wondering all sorts of things about the lovely subject... For me, it's where she buys her alluring jean shorts... I mean, I've seriously got to get me a pair, asap !.... hubba hubba....
lol.
Thank you for sharing your inner monologue of thoughts with us... I hope the coffee is as good as the employees are depicted!!
Cheers! ☕
🌹 💙
-Susan
This is a true feast for the senses... like stumbling onto a fun filled carnival of descriptive delights!!
Your batista of choice surely inspires in such a rich and heady way ... I love the snow leopard reference—it's perfectly sensual and part of the reason the poem leads one on a fantastical thought journey, wondering all sorts of things about the lovely subject... For me, it's where she buys her alluring jean shorts... I mean, I've seriously got to get me a pair, asap !.... hubba hubba....
lol.
Thank you for sharing your inner monologue of thoughts with us... I hope the coffee is as good as the employees are depicted!!
Cheers! ☕
🌹 💙
-Susan
Oh, honey, this lady was dressed to slay on that day. She carries herself with the air of a domme who is up to serious business. lol I mean she was wearing jean shorts with a ripped front and that black nail polish of a true Goth. But my fascination with her began long before that day. Her Goth ambiance caught me in a web of dark beauty from the start. So very glad you picked up on the meaning of my imagery here my darling one. You know me so well. Your RL was the cherry on my sundae my love.
XoXo
John
XoXo
John
