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No Furniture Wax
Deep down mahogany
with no furniture wax,
tucked in
still, I feel the silence,
silence of your breath,
still, whispering
a moment of composure,
forever, as the winds blow
deep down mahogany,
as I weep, to the sound of oboes
and reeds of arabesque
with no furniture wax,
tucked in
still, I feel the silence,
silence of your breath,
still, whispering
a moment of composure,
forever, as the winds blow
deep down mahogany,
as I weep, to the sound of oboes
and reeds of arabesque
Published 29th Apr 2023
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29th Apr 2023 2:37pm
I think, despite the dark vibes that shroud your words, patches of old memories
still stick to your mind, may be being an ex marine has its repercussions so far :.
missing the loved ones is really depressing..Stay safe my friend..
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- Edited 29th Apr 2023 10:46pm
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29th Apr 2023 10:14pm
30th Apr 2023 4:50am
Dear A,
Such a beautiful and painful ache in this write. The missing furniture polish is a creative metaphor. Well written.
H🌷
Such a beautiful and painful ache in this write. The missing furniture polish is a creative metaphor. Well written.
H🌷
30th Apr 2023 1:57pm
