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break-up
The tree which was
standing covered
with a sheet of
waving leaves till
now, has had a
breakup with its
own spring season....
in the warmth of
the holy sun, and
in the testimony of
the sensuous drops
of rain, used to breed
day and night, n now
that relationship is
broken, the spring has
become angry on
something....
the tree which used
to kiss the cold scented
winds every day n night,
in whose presence every
branch used to dance,
that tree has become
barren, that thing has
been missed now...
the one who was the
pride of the garden,
who used to stand in
an attractive model style
by applying green foundation,
today he is standing
without makeup
like a widower....
the spring left, even
the leaves broke the
relationship. The birds
kept distance, even a
beautiful little sparrow
sadly turned away and
went away...
The one which used to
be adorned in shades of
green till now, ever since
autumn came, broke up
with spring and the
world turned ugly....
standing covered
with a sheet of
waving leaves till
now, has had a
breakup with its
own spring season....
in the warmth of
the holy sun, and
in the testimony of
the sensuous drops
of rain, used to breed
day and night, n now
that relationship is
broken, the spring has
become angry on
something....
the tree which used
to kiss the cold scented
winds every day n night,
in whose presence every
branch used to dance,
that tree has become
barren, that thing has
been missed now...
the one who was the
pride of the garden,
who used to stand in
an attractive model style
by applying green foundation,
today he is standing
without makeup
like a widower....
the spring left, even
the leaves broke the
relationship. The birds
kept distance, even a
beautiful little sparrow
sadly turned away and
went away...
The one which used to
be adorned in shades of
green till now, ever since
autumn came, broke up
with spring and the
world turned ugly....
Published 28th Apr 2023
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29th Apr 2023 1:48am
29th Apr 2023 2:17am
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30th Apr 2023 4:41am
You have always appreciated me. no matter how much I thank you, it is always less. always appreciating me compels me to write more n more. I would definitely say that there should always be a positive person like you who will never let us get sad n depress. no matter how I wrote, I always get something best from you. Thank you very much for your constant support!
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6th May 2023 2:15am
Fantastic theme, visuals, aesthetics, transitions, and emotion. There really is a lot here, and I enjoyed reading it. It was almost like a parable, but rather, a performance of a lover's morality. Thanks for sharing!
6th May 2023 2:28am
Hey there
Thank you for reading this stuff, I'm glad that you liked n enjoyed my words. N yaa thanks for including my words in your RL. It's pleasure!
Thank you for reading this stuff, I'm glad that you liked n enjoyed my words. N yaa thanks for including my words in your RL. It's pleasure!
8th May 2023 7:28am
Very moving read here. The way you write makes it so easy to see the imagery you convey and the deep emotion is impossible to not literally hear and feel. The good thing about it all is that spring always comes back around and promises cleansing and renewal :) Lovely writing. Thank you for sharing.
8th May 2023 7:43am
Thank you for such an extensive comment. It feels good when someone reads, then n then our writing succeeds. well i liked that you read!
