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OPENED FLOWER
She opened her flower, her petals he parted,
partoook of her nectar, polllination started
as they clung to each other as if for dear life,
consummating their new state as husband and wife.
She was the fresh fair rose, he the bumbling bee,
in performing the act by which they begat me.
partoook of her nectar, polllination started
as they clung to each other as if for dear life,
consummating their new state as husband and wife.
She was the fresh fair rose, he the bumbling bee,
in performing the act by which they begat me.
Published 21st Apr 2023
Author's Note
Describing lovemaking in flower and bee terms. Also inspired by Nizana's poems How Was I Made and The Spreading of Petals
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21st Apr 2023 9:03am
hello ss
you have woven very delicate and sensuous words, you have captured your begat process beautifully in just a few words. i like your writing style and thinking!! well played
you have woven very delicate and sensuous words, you have captured your begat process beautifully in just a few words. i like your writing style and thinking!! well played
21st Apr 2023 11:44am
21st Apr 2023 1:16pm
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- Edited 2nd Jul 2023 5:45pm
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